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I'm Sorry just Isn't Enough

let's break a name
drop it on a broken heart
lets leave marks on this
empty space

broken hearts are so overrated
slit wrists are so last century
lets pray for a new way
to create this destruction

i like the way i can forget
everything, sanity lost
only to come right back
in fullforce, making me wince

it seems like i deserve
everything thrown back
in my face, every loving gesture
turned around for malice

lets make everything hurt
worse than its supposed
every glance strikes a chord
in my heart, making the nights seem filled with dread

i'm sorry
just isnt enough
it never
is and never will be

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  • broken hearts are so overrated
    slit wrists are so last century
    lets pray for a new way
    to create this destruction


    this is so true.
    excellent write.
    loved the form.


  • Bruised.Roses
    April 20

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    I like the structure to this piece, this was an amazing write i really enjoyed it alot. you have a great talent, it just flowed so well. keep it up!!!
    xox
    Tasha


  • dani girl
    April 17

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    wow

    this is so amazing i can feal you pain
    *sob*
    keep writing
    youramazing
    comment back
    broken harted girl x