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Trapped Between Yesterday and Tomorrow

He was supposed to come
yesterday, the day before,
I don't even know.
His excuse?
"I'm working".
"I'm busy."
"I have a good friend coming over."
"I'll reschedule for
tomorrow."
Tomorrow.
So I wait
Already dressed
I become what he loves
I'm skinny
Green eyes
Black hair
Red lips and shoes
God, red
His favorite color
Little black dress
I wait
I pace
And finally fall asleep
In the corner
Waiting since yesterday
Til tomorrow.

Author notes

I tried, but no guarantees.

Picture Credit: http://evilxelf.deviantart.com/art/Yesterday-s-Girl-38650200

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  • lealea
    December 29, 2008
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    i likie


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 3, 2008

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    I like the almost simplicity feeling this envokes; I see her all dressed and ready to go and being disappointed each time

    Well penned!

    Thank You & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Rheea gold member
    September 26, 2008
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    This was excellent for the prompt!!!