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To the Self-Destructors

 

 

 

   There's a slow burn

 kindled with slow turns,

twists of the wrist,

whims of the mind,

 owned by a girl who might never learn

 

possessions possess the possessor.

 

 

  She's racing but her chief

 doesn't schedule pitstops.

She's boxing but her coach

isn't watching the fight.

 

   Silently, she waits for closure;

 you would too

when your insides can't raise thier influence

over the bonfire of your life raging.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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