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Dark Side Of The Moon

In my sky
You shine bright
Always,
There is no dark side
To the moon
As you smile your
Charm-angels-from-the-heavens grin.
Eclipse
The stars
With your mosaic eyes,
You pull the tides in your direction,
And I feel your grip on
Reality tightening,
While mine is
Slipping away.
My skin
Drips with the
Saccharine poison
Of your luminescence,
And I know
In the bleak abyss
Of my mind,
Your music echoes off of
Every shift and fold
Of my soul.
Ever changing,
You
Flow and ebb like
An astral mystery,
My lunar orb,
I’ll live in the light
Of the moon forever.
[there is no dark side of the moon]

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  • Gay-Militant
    September 27, 2008

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    the impressions you leave in your words are astounding. as if a web of tenacious feelings sprawled forth from fingertips. an intricate flow of passion and desire. you are the writer i aspire to be.
    amazing work.

  • sophierules
    September 26, 2008
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    Beautiful

    I adore it, it made me smile and it made me think of my boyfriend who I love very much