Alone and
Beautiful,
Covered with the
Dark
Ethereally
Faceted
Gorgeousness of
Highly
Intricate
Jasmine is a
Kaleidoscope of
Lovely
Monophonic
Nectar.
Once pure beauty, it now
Passes
Qualification of
Rarity,
Succumbing to the
Tantalizing
Undergrowth of the
Vaguely
Wondrous
Xanadu,
Yielding unending
Zeal for nature's exquisiteness.
Author notes
Eh. It sucks. But at least I tried.
Option 10 and Option 20
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It doesn't suck, I think it's really good. On some lines, you've just written one word and that wasn't really the idea, but the rest is really good, and the majority of the lines have more than one word, so it's great! Also, that is the most interesting 'X' word I've had in the contest - Xanadu. Great!
Good luck in the contest.
best wishes as always
Autumn Whisper
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