timid fingers gingerly test the waters...perfect!
candlelight gives the drab room a romantic aire, wafts of smoke fade,
leaving scents of rose petals with musky undertones.
she lays her head back on folded towel, hands move up her thighs, her
breath coming faster, wondering if she locked the door.
fingers stop at the mound sitting between her legs, surprised by the
hot, wetness she finds beneath the water.
she had dreamnt of this all day, now no one is here to interrupt as
her hands know all too well just what to do.
careful not to make too much noise, her fingers find a needy swell,
and begin rubbing, circling her clit.
it is soon hard and erect, demanding attention now fully aroused.
skilled fingers rub, moving ever faster, squeezing her breast with
her other hand.
teasing her own nipples, moaning, wishing they would fit in her mouth
her hips moving slowly, cautious not to make a splash.
biting her lip, a finger has found it's way inside, she's ramming
her throbbing pussy, fucking herself hard, lost in dreams of a past
lover.
cumming hard, juices hotter than the bathwater, outside the
window an alley cat squawls, the candles have burned out.
shadows move across the floor, it will be morning soon...
A contest entry
- "Let's Get It On" by Loversdance.
400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow! Great write! Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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Wow, this was hot, I can only think of one way to comment, so here It is.....
Voyeuristicly yours!!......through a door slightly ajar.
I love to watch you
as you pleasure yourself
u n a w a r e
of all the world around you
and of me just standing there
That way you lovingly explore
your "Oh, so private parts!"
as your fingers dip beneath the swells
in sudden stops, and starts .
Your sweet lips slightly parted
as you utter gentle sighs
while each fingers traces patterns
on that spot between your thighs
Then your body starts to tremble
as you push against your hand
like you've plunged up tight against my face
when I've met your demands.
Soon deliciously it's over
with soft moans and smothered screams
and your face looks like a kewpie
joy is bursting from it's seams .
Your half-closed eyes glance upward
till you're looking right at me
then you share that secret smile
your finger crooks invitingly.
so I join you to write one more verse
in Love's great symphony
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Wow...
a sight worth seeing...
may I act as a peeping lez, honey?...though I crave for something more....
Brilliant!
Seductive!
Lustful kisses...all over you!
Galaxy2
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MOVING....!!!
You KNOW I love this....!!
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Exotic poem
If only DH Lawrence got around to writing poetry like this he'd have been a better poet than he was. This is good, erotica poetry, it has style, imagination, and sensuality.
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