I think you should try again
Somewhere far away
You fail at life
I think you should try again
Somewhere far away
I think you should try again
Somewhere far away
Author notes
Why yes that IS an emote in my poem, I am just that great 
Poetic burn
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hahahahaha
This was great! Ah, the Imposing Snail, you have NOT changed! I always thought you were a funny one, thus why I put you on my favorites so long ago. XD Great write, I loved this! Being an ex-wow-addict, I can see this fitting all too well for some people! Thanks for sharing, gave me a laugh!
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Oh yes you are that great! You get away with it.
i'm in a bad mood yet you made me smile.
I thank you for that.
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plain and simple, yet very facinating!
and you really are that great!
niniBABY(:
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nice
It was some fun that was funny
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I like it but it could be much better. But i dont write haiku so i have no suggestions.
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this would be awesome to see a funny haiku in proper form.....
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I know one should be counting 5-7-5 hyouon moji instead of syllables, but I have neither the knowledge of Japanese linguistics nor the time and patience to do so.
Form has never been my strength anyway.
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uhhhh.... I don't know what your accent sounds like (so I was trying to do a British accent while reading this), but to me, there's only 4 syllables in the first line.
I like it though. It made me laugh.
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It does depend on which British accent you were trying to use. I have an RP (Received Pronunciation) accent. So it's pronounced something like (I suck at phonetics BTW):
FEY-all
It probably is pushing it a bit even the way I say it. But meh
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RP eh...not heard that term used since Uni (my degree was Linguistics). You're posh then?
The poem, as that's why I'm here, made me smile. x
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"Posh? Oh yes!" he says with long, unkempt hair and wearing yesterday's t-shirt and jeans.
In tone, perhaps; but not in nature
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this was as lame as my dead dog
yea I went there
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