I am furious.
I can't control my actions right now.
I feel my heart beating faster and faster.
I want to do things that are not nice.
I could scream to the heavens and still I would be furious.
I could hit the devil in the face and still I would feel the fury running through my veins.
I don't know my own power so it's greatly unexpected.
I dare you to try me.
I don't play nice.
Nothing can stop me.
I am furious.
A contest entry
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GREAT!!!! i love this! i can relate so well. I know the feeling you have just described perfectly here. The feeling where you are so angry even you dont know what you are capable of. just fantastic. Keep up the good work. Thank you for entering my contest
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I think you have summed up the emotion of "furious" nicely here. I think it would make a stronger poem to be inspired by the emotion and let the a flow instead of reiterating it but it is a good rant.
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wusah little sis...lol
"Heaven has no rage like love to hatred turned,
Nor hell a fury like a woman scorned."
William Congreve (1670 - 1729)
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nice. keep up the good work
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I would never hit the devil! He may be evil, but we converse from time to time. But besides, this is a really good poem! Good job!
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Hm...
You are "teaching" me furious... Quite interesting. I don't if I would hit the devil because I was that mad. The worse person to hurt when you're mad is God. But, anyways nice work. Good luck. -
Welcome to Allpoetry
Excellent use of emotion to allow us to feel the piece...
I love the us of "I can't control my actions right now" as that truly is indicative of direct anger.
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Sometimes our passions just can't be appeased that easy. Maybe you just need to hit the right person.
I am kidding, I am certainly not endorsing violence! lol Yours is an effective poem. \
Keep writing!
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