shrill boom
across the room-
loud snore
the shadow
of your smile-
toothless
withered wallflowers
hanging flaccidly-
wrinkles on the face
Summer51
Author notes
I'm good at this kind of Haiku... 
No holds barred... 
Sheeesh.... ! 
Summer51
A contest entry
- haiku humor by Yemassee.
749 points, ended September 27, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything but gold... by SchizoChic.
450 points, ended October 3, 2008, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Are you the one? :))
Comments
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Hmmm a haiku something to smile even the toothles ones could smile at this.
an oh on Sir Yem's contest -
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Thanks, again, Ann.
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Brilliant work in so few words. You really do haiku justice. Best of luck in life and in this contest.
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Thanks for the nice comment, SchizoChic.
Well appreciated.
summer51
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Summer this one is hilarious and congratulations on the silver trophy
hugs Moony
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Thanks, kismoony. Yeah...hilarious but really happens in real life... ME, included!!!
Good morning from the country Philippines, my sweet lady! 
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Very good haiku...
The first one is funny...
The last one make me sad!!
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Hello, k-Ninos!
Why make you sad? We all go to that stage in life...
You're NOT ALONE....
Thanks for the comment.
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You are right, but the emotion just crop up...lol!!!
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Yeah, I do agree with you with that emotion you feel... sad but we have to accept that, that is
part of life process...
The FOUNTAIN of YOUTH hasn't discover yet, eh! lol... Only cosmetics to "hide" a little of those lines. 
Thanks again for dropping by, k-Ninos.
Good Monday morning here in my country.
Summer51
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Hi summer
Congratulations! Hmm, now to read your limerick.
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Yeah... Hmmm... give up, give up! You still have time...
Thanks, friend for dropping by.
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Oh, I'm
, Mumsy! I'm not that talented.... "just only" (meaning: A little)
Thank you and congratulations, also.
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Dear Summer,
You are becoming more and more adventurous!!!
Image grabbing, clever concepts, good humor!!!!!
Great!
Mumsy
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Yes,Mumsy... hehehe! Kinda... naughty...but just a little, ha?
Thanks, Mumsy!
Love yah.. and
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See, it is just not I
who sees your talent!
That's sort of like an
"I told you so" in a good way!
Silver kudos for you!!!!
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the shadow
of your smile-
toothless
I really like that! Perfect image, and funny!
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I was too, with this, Ma'am MariGoes.
Thanks for the nice comment.
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This is really cute...I know some one who fits each one and some that fit all collectivily...
Love your floppy eared bunny
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Uh? There's someone who have all those qualities?
I can't believe it!!! that's PERFECT, eh!
Thanks, Madam for the comment here. I do appreciate that.
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You are so welcome and congratulations on the silver...it was well deserved...
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Thank you,again, Ma'am J aime Coudre.
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Oops, forgot the applause.
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The first one is definitely a haiku about me!
The second one is hilarious...and wacky, and a great visual <-------------Imagine the front teeth missing!
The third one, oh my, remind me never to show you my photo!
They're all fun stuff...including that cute bunny! -
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How I wish you would....
I mean your photo...
Thanks, Sir Yem for the funny comment.
SMILE... ------>
Summer51
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