There are no limits,
to our imagination, so dream.
Step out of the box
of deception, redeem.
Possibilities are endless,
reach for the stars.
Restrictions are illusions,
remove the bars.
If joy is what you're after,
feel it and smile.
Push past your burdens,
live life in style.
Jump over disappointment,
skip over doubt,
laugh at disaster;
give out a shout.
Create in your mind,
what you want life to be,
take out your paintbrush;
invent reality.
Author notes
P i s c e s r a i n b o w
'There is no hope in darkness and there is darkness in hope'
A contest entry
- Live, Laugh, Love by aligurl.
425 points, ended October 11, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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1300 points, ended October 15, 2008, 26 entries
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650 points, ended October 29, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
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600 points, ended December 1, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Wow this poem is amazing! I really loved this one, it spoke volumes to me. As if you knew my heart and mind and all of the restraints I put on both! Beautiful write! Thank you for entering and good luck!!
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Oh I completely adore the ending.
Can you space your name out like X x N i n j a N e m o x X please? Cause it came up Anonymized cause you never spaced it out.
But anyway, I love this. It's so hopeful and bright
Thanks for entering and best of luck!
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this is really fantastic, it has such hope and shows that although it can be hard some days, life is very much worth it, best of luck in the contest
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this is so impactful. it is exactly what i was looking for. it is easy to relate to and it is beautifully inspiring. my one concern is that you used the wrong "you're"
fix that!
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Such an optimistic write, I like it very much! You're challenging the reader to take control of their life and live it free and happy. Great job! "Jump over disappointment, skip over doubt" I like wording you used. Congrats on your trophies so far and good luck in the current contest!
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thankyou very much for entering
i wish you all the best of luck
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Nice positive affirmations. I like the rhymes and the flow.
"take out your paintbrush;
invent reality."
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An inspiring work bringing us to the beauty of life through your great poetry my friend.,.well done indeed..
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I look forward to painting my new life. I feel your poem decribes what I am tring to acomplish in my work. We are not alone!!!
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Inventing realities is the optimistic part of this life..and the poets are the leaders into this specialisations..for example..I put your this poem here as an efect of this subject..well done...
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yay.. i really really liked this poem i love rhyme. and u did it perfectly but simple. wow. a great poem. the closing lines were really terrific. thank u for entering and good luck in my contest.
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Excellent Rhyme scheme--Nothing forced or pedestrian--Great flow of verse!
Well Done!
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BEAUTIFUL!!!
Dreams are truly what keeps us going, never should one be afraid of being themselves and trying new and different things.
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"Jump over disappointment" - I like that phrase
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A very positve approach to living a good life!
Enjoyed the read and the subject matter.
Best of Life-and Luck to you!
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