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Alliteration Musings

Aaron and Arabella argue about
books burdening bike bags,
carried carelessly, cornering
down dangerous driveways.

Each eloquently explains
flying furiously further,
gaining greater
haste, having hit horrible hurdles,
intelligently inventing
jokes, jauntily jumbling,
knowingly keeping kindnesses.

Love lost, leaves
much mourning, memories mar moving
nearer, never negotiating
offered ordinance,
preparing peaceful pathways,
quivering quietly,
rejection reigning,
showing souls sentiments sometimes slightly sore,
to thoughts thawing tenderly
under unity's umbrella.

Vanity vows valiant
wins. We wickedly wrestle
xenophobia.

Yet yelling
zealously zips zestful zealots!

Author notes

Not an easy task. Think I rambled on in the end!!
Thanks for the challenge!

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  • Ja Vorbesc
    September 26, 2008

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    A little bit at the very end, but all preceding was marvelous! You are commended.

    Luck to you!


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    You didn't ramble at all, this is bloody fantastic, how did you do that and make it all make sense. I salute thee!! Best to you in this incredible contest