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Women And Men

I see girls dressed like male fantasies, walking down the street in high heels
It shouldn't be their purpose to impress us on their knees. A girl is far more
attractive when she stands up, for herself or for what she believes in. Subservience breeds ignorance and contempt. There's hardly any real women left. They should be fierce, frightening creatures, not shy almost children, a woman dressed in a girls clothes. A short skirt leaves a sour taste in my imagination, women are not just a source of masturbation. I call for cessation of this ridiculous trend, to pander to men, because once you've got their attention, what then. If there's nothing to you but tits and ass, then they just won't ask anything of you but a smile as you swallow cum and lick your lips, suck lollipops and buck your hips, women aren't people, they are each individuals, a person, a story, a life, not just your wife, but your sister or mother with likes and dislikes and they're potential depth is what makes them attractive. Not rolling around on a carpet in skimpy lingerie like a spastic. Pornography perpetuates the idea that women are separate, but to include them amongst men is almost a bigger insult, most women, get the wrong end of the stick, they think that most guys are dicks and their half right, that's not complete shite, they are dicks, connected to assholes that want to control themselves, but don't or won't because it's hard to not act like a retard when you've got everything around you screaming SEX. That's not to say that media is entirely to blame, but next time you watch a string of adverts see if you don't think the same, shower gel, chocolate cake, late night hotlines, they're all the same, a woman's voice, excited and playful, it's no wonder most men can't help but get an eyeful and the men that I see on TV  and the ones I know personally are wankers but pretend not to be, in front of their lady, but amongst their friends their pitiful, the shit they pull to impress... but I digress.

Human relationships are a mess.

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Two separate rants about women and men that I've put together to create one free flowing super poem.

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  • SatuRn Grotesk
    September 26, 2008
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    Super Fantasic

    AWW....Push, you know I LOOOOVE your stuff. and this is awesomely fantasmic! haha. I like the rhyme scheme that you do not so much favour and they truth behind it all. Women are not so much to be an object of masturbation for men. We are our own individuals who flourish in our own light!!

    <3 MUCH!!!
    SatuRn