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Beyond What Is Seen

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Dedicated to those who beyond just black and white!



Dramatic white against greytones and black,
Draw us within and makes us think a whole stack!

We are made to visualize the colours that are,
Made to go within and stretch our minds far...

White water like white silk flows with force,
The hard grey and black tones stark no remorse....

Illustrating the stark differences in many things,
Monochromatic vision transcends our mind with wings...

Way beyond the stark reality we see,
The ambiance and depth of the pictoral reality..

Dramatic differences so clearly seen,
When we examnine beyond the sensational sheen..

Light in the darkness is always there,
For those who think beyond with care...

Nothing good or bad lasts forever,
Calm can come after most stormy weather...

Water flows with varying velocity,
As life changes pace throughout eternity...

Water flowing keeps chi on the move,
In Feng Shui this is regarded 'the groove'!

Water hits the pool below,
Forming a star pattern don't you know!

Stars light up a darkend sky,
Planets and galaxies passing us by...

Beyond what seems to be doom and gloom,
Is a whole new universal room...

In which to dwell in the hope of light,
Advance you can and on track right...

Look beyond the surface and see what's really there,
Nothing is really black and white or colour bare...

Where there is hope there is life,
Where there is life there is hope, no strife..

Lean toward the white not the black,
Watch hope life is nicer a huge big stack...

Monochrome forces us to notice the white,
Gravitate toward white and life will stay bright.



Copyright:K:September 2008

Author notes



Picture Credit:
http://static.zooomr.com/images/4185195_62a3344d8b.jpg



Picture depicts:
Beautiful waterfall where the gushing water falls into a
pool below forming a star shape. Water looks like liquid white silk against start grey and balck tones and textures of the stones and flora surrounding the waterfall.



Allpoetry.com Contest
September 2008
Black and White by Reptile Lady
In a world of black and white, our vision captures the beauty within
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2422175
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Clue to what I love is in the lines I have used above.
Take my breath away..
Best wishes to you
Julie x



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  • Violinstrings silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    good job

    I read again I like look for the white and not the black the last two stanza great comparison between life and black and white


  • Violinstrings silver member
    September 28, 2008
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    good job

    yes that was a great piece expresses art in black and white with great powerful verses


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    Breath taking
    I am in awe with the beauty of your words
    The whole poem I adore
    Thank you and best wishes
    Julie


  • solitarytear
    September 27, 2008

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    your work kaz

    it always amazes me.....each time i read another of you poems i sigh inwards and close my eyes for just a moment coz you dont just write poem you give it a life in my eyes.....i'm consently in awe at your words and gift......


    • Kazytc silver member
      September 27, 2008
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      Aww thanks millions!

      You are so kind in your lovely caring reviews, which always touch me deeply, and what you say is so encouraging and inspiring too. Thanks Millions for your lovely kind words you are an angel.
      I am so impressed with you pheomenal work too, you have an amazing talent and are so very expressive too.
      I hope you win gold in every contest you enter and best of luck to you in all things.
      Poetic Hugs & Thanks Millions & Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx

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