She is alone
once she had nearly three hundred sisters
working their tickets around the world
From Archangel to the Antilles
Savannah to Suez they were familiar sights
small and friendly
flying flags of the free world
feeding the fight
The bravest of brave men
rode these workhorses
protecting the shipping
that saved the world
Slow noisy and uncomfortable
but tough and seaworthy
patrolling and cajoling
keeping the stragglers in line
facing the wolf-packs
and the lone raiders
fighting e-boats and u-boats
and even pocket battleships
these flowers of the sea
did not last long
and now there is just one
staunchly Canadian
a proud veteran
of desperate times
No longer a bastion
of freedom in a time of tyranny
HMCS Sackville now escorts
the last remains of Atlantic veterans
not eager young soldiers
or shiploads of sugar
The last corvette
still serves
Author notes
297 Flower class corvettes were built in the UK and Canada to escort convoys at the start of WWII. They accounted for dozens of submarines and a few aircraft and captured the first Naval enigma machine (even if not in the films!!!)
The Canadian ships were called after Canadian towns rather than flowers.
I have been captivated by their story since reading The Cruel Sea by Nicholas Montsarrat (sp?)
Prompt was "an old corvette"
In a list
A contest entry
- Simple Free Verse Poetry by Dalaney.
900 points, ended October 2, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hi Jeff, your use of alliteration here sings the sounds of passing sea to me. Wonderful writing as ever and a great take on your chosen prompt. many congrats on a well deserved gold. I would love to have entered this but have been too busy of late - I have no idea where some of you find the time from! It's beer time now - so I'm off!
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Tin? Damn... gold!
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i am definitely going to read the book. you've mastered free verse. there is nothing i can say or add to what you now do so effortlessly. the twist on the prompt is wonderful...no old cars for you...you head for the sea
love, lane -
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There's nothing effortless in it
I have to write it and keep going back over and over to make it into poetry. Now a sonnet, that's effortless
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Welll..Ive had enough.
This is wonderfully penned
Have a great night.
Tory
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Simple. Free. Verse. It does exactly what it says on the tin.
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