I’d love to go behind the door
but with the dog there’s no rapport
Each time I get a little nearer
he bares his teeth ever clearer
I tried him once with a piece of sweet gum
he ran at me and bit my bum
It’s vicious of him, as my entrance he does decline
you wouldn’t believe the bloody dogs mine
Author notes
http://allpoetry.com/group/info/Silver%20Keys%20and%20Seven%20Hundred%20Seventy%20Steps?stay=1
A contest entry
- Open The Door by nichtmich.
2625 points, ended October 14, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Short and funny! I don't care for long drawn out jokes. Good rhyme and snappy rhythm, thanks for the entry!


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HI
Thank you for your comments,I enjoyed wring it.
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KEVIN
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