Without a voice of refusal
tiny, curled body
merely whimpers.
Author notes
Propmt - NO (10 words)
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A contest entry
- Be brilliant please by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended September 26, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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makes me think of a baby at the mother's breast here, there is no refusal and so little whimpers of joy suckle along - a good poem.
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no voice huh? This is sad. I'd bet my husband wishs at times I had no voice.
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This is so sad.
Profoundly expressed.
Congrats on the Bronze!
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This is just so sad!.. x
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This left a lump in my throat and a lack of words to use to describe why. Best to you in the contest
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