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Night Fighter (Acrostic)

Never give up
Irredescent hope
Going quickly
Haring off
To places unknown

Forging ahead
In this forgotten Realm
Giving and receiving
Hearts full of love
Together
Eons ahead
Respectful of wishes and dreams

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interesting, tried to make it more like a full poem than a bunch of words describing myself, if this is wrong let me know and I will re-write it. GGood Luck Everyone!
Written January 23rd, 2004

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  • Ahlyn
    January 23, 2004
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    claps Nice acrostic-thingy! hehe! I didn't really say you had to put it up like I did, in verbing way anyways, and I liked this! Pretty good. By the way, (just saying) You can always enter more if you feel like you want to. Thanks for entering!

    PS Keep that warm and loving spirit!

    Ilse