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Black Lace

To take a look at your new underwear
Instead of a quick peek, I wish I could stare

Tight against the skin in between your legs
Revealing what's under, is what my heart begs

                          I wonder if you feel as softly aroused as me
                          Envisioning your bare mound glistening wet as can be

                          Biting my lip gently as I get the model turn
                          Your back now facing me and my loins begin to burn



In my sight I see your truest beauty
Fitting panties up the crack of your booty

Buttocks so inviting to the naked eye
As I gaze while hardening against my thigh

                          To rub and massage on each cheek of flesh
                          And hear you moan in pure pleasure, unmeshed

That's what I picture in my mind as I look at you
Most gorgeous body in the world turning me on, too

                          After rubbing a while, I know I'll want a taste
                          Bite into each side gently while my fingers trace

                          Down the slit of your behind, removing it slow
                          Spreading you cheeks while I caress the small hole



As you tease and please me at the same time
My body relaxes and feels simply sublime

Once you go back to being covered up for bed, then
I imagine that black lace and can't wait to see it again...



Author notes

I saw her last night...and her body is gorgeous...and I told her after she left that I would think about her 'black lace' panties...and this is what came to mind...

Absolutely beautiful...I was turned on...more in a gentle way...rather than a steamy way...but wish I could have seen more of her...

This is just for my babe...love you...and you are a dime + 999...always...especially to me...

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  • A63-Angel
    November 6, 2008
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    this is hot!! great write

  • limechic
    September 26, 2008

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    aww this was sooooooo well written!! it was so sensual and the rhyming worked and i love how you separated your erotic thoughts from your sensual ones...love love love it great job!


  • sensualbutterfly
    September 26, 2008

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    WOW! That was absolutely such a turn on!!! How sweet you talk about her!!! Wonderful! Thanks for the entry