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Drowning in your maybes

grasping at straws

slow dying

because

you won't say

No




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10 words
prompt: No

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    September 26, 2008
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    Deeply profound... x


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    This is a really dark interpretation of the prompt here, so sad. Well written. Best to you in the contest.