Empty room;
lavender hues
she sits vacantin silent screams.
A contest entry
- Be brilliant please by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended September 26, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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She is right, very sad.
Congratulations on the Silver.
Love
Don
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Nicely written in 10 words sis. Going to be tough to beat I'm thinking, but I'll give it a go..
Scott 
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How incredibly sad... x
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oh my... you dont know how that is me right now...
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Nice take on prompt
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you are amazing
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Brain dead? Give me that damn muse, if you think this is dead, I will have it!! Gladly! You just penned the winning poem in this contest. Best to you and gold as well
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