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Tory's poetry

Perfectly passionate poetry penned
Ardent admirers are always aware
Subtle seductions she'll sexily send
So steamy she surely should scare
Innocent images inching inside 
Outrageously outright outre
Never nuanced no nonsense no-side
Someone says sonnets still sway

Perk-up pure poetry prettily posed
Running rumbustious rhyme
Overboard overblown often opposed
Mistress makes many more mime
Isn't it innocent ideally in-time
Something so sweetly supreme
Ecstatic erotic extreme

Author notes

I can't really do acrostics so I thought I would play with them in honour of the greatest acrosticist on AP

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  • NeonRose
    September 28, 2008
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    A most enjoyable tribute! Tongue-twisting tantalizing tidbit! Best to you in the contest!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 26, 2008
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    Wonderful tribute to ME.
    Love it and love you thank you.

    Tory

  • CandaceVaughn
    September 26, 2008

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    Oh a tribute to Tory followed by..oh no I wont go there...she already knows.. three voice mails and two text messages.

    This is absolutely stunning. Wonderfully penned.

    Love you Tory!!

    You too Jeff s


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    I agree with Sandygram
    FOr someone who does not do Acrostics, you have penned an excellent rhyming Acrostic cleverly and with such devotion to a wonderfully talented poetess and lovely lady...Ty for entering this beautiful dedication...

    Lynda


  • Sandygram
    September 26, 2008

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    Wonderful Acrostic

    Well you have penned a terrific rhyming acrostic. They are such fun to read and write.
    You have captured who this lovely poet is so well in your words!! Thank you for sharing your talent. This was a delight to read. Take care.

    Sandy


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    Acrosticist - Is that even a word, Jeff? It is now, I suppose.

    By the way, "intime" is pronounced "anteem", and is a quick way of bringing about revocation of your poetic license.

    But I love this, nonetheless. A special poem for a very special and unique person.

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