Remember sucking my toe?
Popped it right in your kisser and kissed.
Or maybe how you pissed on me just once.
You don’t remember?
I do.
On top of me, you ate my face, intending to entice,
Then excused yourself to the restroom.
On my leg was
one
hot
drop
and I loved you for it.
Remember palming my bare ass?
Surrounded by people in the dark.
Or maybe how you breathed heat in my ear.
You don’t remember?
I do.
Seated, you pressed me to your chest and played the legs,
Fumbling to occasional delight.
In my mind was
fear
arousal
confusion
and I’ll never forget your breath.
young
uncertain
horny
We shook hands with the underworld--
but fled before we got ourselves in deep.
I was "chaste" still, sure,
but you will always have my innocence.
I never did thank you for keeping it.
Remember how badly you wanted me?
Want me, even now.
I do.
Can’t we go back in time?
Let’s.
Author notes
I intended this to be crass and oddly endearing. The spare language and cursing is a product of that.
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I think this is a favorite. But if you asked me to help you pick poems for a sony star portfolio i probably wouldn't say that =]
Even though some of it may seem strange to first-glancers, it's all very true and human which is what makes it touching. And I really like the way it all kind of points toward and flows into the ending.
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Thanks!
I honestly had no idea what you would think of this. I've shared almost all of my human sides with you, but not my crassness or... lustiness? Those traits are often easy for other people to exhibit, but they seem at odds with the way I usually present myself.
This is very much about how things that are ugly or alarming can be touching. I'm glad you like it.
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This... is cute.. in a dirty sort of way... but then again, not too dirty.
It plays on innocence, and that makes this wonderful.
I was "chaste" still, sure,
but you will always have my innocence.
I never did thank you for keeping it.
Those are my favourite lines.
♥
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