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The 24th of September




I see the days slowly passing
in scenes before my eyes
the thoughts, the words, the laughs, the tears
so cruelly through my mind do fly
I have not thought, nor word, nor mind, nor heart
that can to me a lasting peace impart
Yet though no peace in me is found
I thank God that in Him days of peace abound.








Author notes

My Journal entry from Sept. 24th. I love the irony of how it is so short and simple and yet it tells of a dilemma so complex and voluminous.

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  • catalyst.
    December 3, 2008

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    You are a really great rhymer, it flows so smoothly and didn't seem forced at all. I hardly noticed it was rhyming because of how natural the words worked together.