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Once a Nomad

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A man of solitude

& grace

with almond eyes & feathered lashes,

serenely swathed in silken robes,


brought me

perfume from Paris,

elegant flowers & smooth chocolates

to tantalize me,

 

to tease my senses

without shame,


relentless.

He spoke fluently

of Gibran & Khayyam

to one aching


to learn


the many languages

of love.

He gave me his uninterrupted attention

(slightly unnerving, at first)


while words flowed between us,

a river

to remember

& savor, later,


alone.

He came with candles

already burning bright,

a handful of stardust,

luminous in his palms ~

yet,

I only

completely


fell

into sighing surrender

when he delicately

& deliciously

fed me figs,

his fingers

slowly brushing,


burning

my mouth,


ripe & sweet


with possibility...







Author notes






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"Desert Rose"

Words and music by Sting
©


"I dream of rain
I dream of gardens in the desert sand
I wake in vain
I dream of love as time runs through my hand

I dream of fire
Those dreams that tie two hearts that will never die
And near the flames
The shadows play in the shape of the mans desire

This desert rose
Whose shadow bears the secret promise
This desert flower
No sweet perfume that would torture you more than this

And now she turns
This way she moves in the logic of all my dreams
This fire burns
I realize that nothings as it seems

I dream of rain
I dream of gardens in the desert sand
I wake in vain
I dream of love as time runs through my hand

I dream of rain
I lift my gaze to empty skies above
I close my eyes
The rare perfume is the sweet intoxication of love

I dream of rain
I dream of gardens in the desert sand
I wake in vain
I dream of love as time runs through my hand

Sweet desert rose
Whose shadow bears the secret promise
This desert flower
No sweet perfume that would torture you more than this

Sweet desert rose
This memory of hidden hearts and souls
This desert flower
This rare perfume is the sweet intoxication of love"






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  • Wolf Mancini
    October 7, 2008

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    Simply magnificent...

    Your words are soft...lovely...perfectly placed.
    The flow is outstanding, but the content is true unadulterated beauty.
    There is nothing I can say to do this justice.
    Thank you for sharing this treasure.

    xo
    wolf


  • crisstiena
    October 2, 2008

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    Nomad:
    "Life should not be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, chocolate in one hand, wine in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming "WOO HOO what a ride!" -- author unknown


    The image, the words, the presentation... this is staggeringly beautiful. I always have to hold my breath when I click on any of your poetry. I never know what to expect, apart from heart-aching beauty. I so like this poem for many reasons - it seems so honest in its presentation. How often do we find ourselves responding to a situation and feeling those exact emotions... or so we feel to be the case. Perhaps it's the same for everyone, perhaps all of us are merely responding to what life throws at us and not recognising our own emotions.

    Every one of your poems is radiant with intensity, so that reading them is like watching a delicate crystal shatter into a million exquisite pieces, each one shining more brilliantly than the one before.

    much love ~ crissy ♥



  • Nicolette gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    Oh I loved how this story unfolded, Vlindertjie...those last lines are just gorgeous. You kept the best "figs" for last here - poetically speaking!

    This is what memories are made of....the nostalgia, the tasteful, the feeding, the good times, the love, the sensuality... Ai, one got to love a man who feeds you figs from his hands. Lovely, lovely poetry - a weave of nostalgia, dream and subtle sensuality here. Loved it. Thank you for this entry, my friend.

    ~ Nicolette


    • Night Hope gold member
      October 1, 2008

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      Thank you, Nic. I saw a documentary on Africa's sycamore fig tree recently. I started thinkin' about Adam & Eve's modest fig leaves...& about my ex (from Egypt) & another fellow I dated before from Saudi Arabia (who was definitely a man after my own heart)...he was a gentle romantic, one capable of great tenderness & even greater understanding. Then he went & asked me to marry him. 'xcept he'd already been married 3 times...& hadn't divorced any of 'em. Customs. Ya gotta love 'em, even when they defy explanation. I told him he was a glutton for punishment, then gracefully declined, explaining that, as a Poet, I preferred to be original. He understood that, too. You always have the most inspiring, unique, provocative contests, my Sister. I always wanna come out to play when I see a new offering from you. Thank you for always being you. I know it's a tough job, but someone's gotta do it. Love you, Woman. Vlindertjie


  • grm
    September 30, 2008

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    well...i used to have almond eyes, but traded them in for macadamians.
    i always did like to dress up nice. lol

    your longing for love has always graced your poetry, and this one is no exception.

    your optimism in life, in love, has no equal (though, of course, i'm excluding my liefie girl here. lol)

    surely, love will find you...as it has me.

    thank for this piece, and for being a great friend when i needed one most


    • Night Hope gold member
      October 1, 2008
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      I love your comment, Guy. Thank you for Being, my Friend. As for your liefie girl's optimism, etc....why do ya think she's been my dearest Soul Sister for 4 years now??? It's so much more than she tenderly holds beauty, optimism, talent, a deep comprehension of sorrow, heart, soul, hope, etc. I always preferred cashews, but I don't think I'd wanna date someone with cashew eyes. Love has found me, more than once (at least, that's what we thought it was, at the time)...but I still hope for another chance, another life, another dream come true. Don always said I had a heart as big as Texas ~ I think he may have (slightly) underestimated its growth potential. Thanks, Sweetie. As for my "being a great friend when (you) needed one most" ~ I still am. Always have been, always will be. I'm pretty consistent, if nothing else. Wander


  • Theasp
    September 27, 2008
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    Am I fanning me!

    Oh, hot! Carpal tunnel slows my writing, one more surgery to go. Higs,
    Ann


  • marc creamore
    September 27, 2008

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    A nirvanic journey into the exotic realm, so perfectly penned that it drips with fertility and unabashed passion . . . I WANNA BE YOUNG AGAIN!!!!

    Marc


  • Providence
    September 27, 2008

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    One of my favorite songs of desire and your work is almost haunting in its interpretation.

    Beautifully done, Wanda!

    Bravo!

    Marianne


  • just mercedes gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    Oh, what a sensual story! You have been blessed, with wealth of words to relive the memory. This made me remember, too. *grins*


  • DogFish silver member
    September 26, 2008
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    ...if there were a paradise!


    • Night Hope gold member
      September 26, 2008
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      Ahhh, but there is, Scribe...even if we haven't quite found it yet. I haven't given up the search for it. Occasionally, we might even discover an oasis while upon the journey.


  • cutiepie gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    This made me think of Sheiks and Turkish delight Ah, such a wonderful confectionery of thoughts my friend! Beautiful (as always), Bravo

  • Cinnarry gold member
    September 26, 2008
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    Just luscious

  • Rowan gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    I live for possibility, so eloquently expressed here, hon. Beautifully sensual.


  • kaibab silver member
    September 26, 2008

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    Such a story of rising desert passion, full many a flower born to blush...indeed there is always possibilitywonderful scribe

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