with those tears
you think you take away all of the pain
without your fears
your nothing
you have nothing to grow from
without your mistakes
you have nothing to learn from
without me
you have no body to love you right
so come back
wipe away your tears
because i will save you from your fears
remember i don't look at your mistakes
i let you learn from them
i look at you
walk back into my life, and ill do the same
I'm here with open arms
come cry into my open arms
come be safe in my open arms
come and learn from you mistakes in my open arms
come and walk into my open arms...
my open arms
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Written January 23rd, 2004
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A contest entry
- Reunited And It Feels So Good by Sapphire Satire.
400 points, ended January 25, 2004, 3 entries
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but what if the arms are closed what then?should the legs open up then?well...anyway nice piece of poem about opening some body parts..good!
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aww this is so weet your right you do learn from your mistakes and they make you stronger and closer and unbreakable to anyone. you did a great job on this poem it was very flattering to see how you love someone as much as you expressed to let them learn from there own mistakes your right you do have nothing to grow from without our mistakes. that whats lets us learn and grow from the mistake to not repeat it yet again.(i hope i made sense) beautiful poem
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