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________ ______

her taste was like
warm beer in winter

and between
knee socks and white skirt
was vision beyond the veil

 

I smoke a cigarette

and inhale

 

this christless

Cuban missile crisis

 

 

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  • Dalaney gold member
    September 27, 2008
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  • Nicolette gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    This one leaves many visuals and visions in the mind...especially the gap in the title!!

    ~ Nicolette


  • Cannonsfire
    September 25, 2008

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    Which bit strikes first or is the one painted red at the point?? C