Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Picture Perfect






four smiles,
two adults,
two adolescents,
picture glaring
like a facsimile of truth,
everyone wondered,
after that tragic day,
how did those smiles come
from those faces

one shot, two
bye bye truth








Author notes

Prompt: "Tragic Package"

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 26, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    How sad! This is very deeply emotional...strong imagery of life's changed forever...moving words in brevity...
    thank you for entering!