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You Overlook Me

"Ignorance is Bliss"
The Lord is pissed
Romance is no longer Romantic
And making love has nothing to do with Love at all

Women seem to become perplexed
As to why I am constantly Vexed
By their Unique personalities
-Personality-
It's astonishing to me
Why you do not comprehend
How much I care

I Care more than your closest friends.
I Love more than your so-called Lover.
I will not be over-insistent
But I am beguilingly persistent

I do not lust after your body
But I Admire it just the same
I will not tell you I Love you
Just to get under your clothes
But I Promise to show you my Love
And get under that fake Heart
You wear on your sleeve

Show me who you are
I promise to be Intrigued
Please, just Promise
You won't overlook me

Author notes

Screen Name: Tito the Ninja

I'm a guy who simply resorts to poetry as a means of expressing my personal thoughts and feelings that most people I encounter on a day-to-day basis ignore.

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  • just weak hands
    October 2, 2008

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    a very true write :] not many people can say this a really mean it ! glad you entered the contest. you really showed a way to be a perfect male !

    good luck !!