Watching for your train
listening for that whistle
the magical moment
that I can run
into your loving arms
my heart races
as you step off
and fall into me
Author notes
Prompt: Sipping Patience
30 Words
A contest entry
- •Quickie• by OnceUponAMind.
475 points, ended September 25, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into Gold (or silver or bronze) pt 8 by whispernthedark.
700 points, ended October 25, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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Awww, I know the feeling! Great take on the prompt!
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How sweet...you are such a romantic and you always make me feel so warm and cozy with your words...for that I am always grateful...well done, my friend...
best to you...
Love,
mystic
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Patience can make one so edgy, waiting for that perfect moment...great writing, Jeremy...
~Jeremy a/k/a voodoo ink
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Vile, sappy, mushy, sweet... This poem embodies everything I am not
But I loved it anyway 
Well done, and best of luck to you!
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so sweet, worthy of the patience. love your background.. good luck
♥
whisper
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This is very beautiful, you captured a moment in time so perfectly, made me smile. Best to you in the contest
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