Looking through this stained glass
i feel the hurt and the anger
rage of emotion and love put to work
its hard to due but emagine it a life
falling from this earth is just an option
feel for what you need and call for what you want
imagain as you please and stare at this stained glass
the light shines through showing every detail
put forth some effort and love this work
a piece of art i think not
its just a window like the rest
looking at the paint it feels so real
standing at the door i hear you knock
a call for help is just desperation of ones fear
walking away and never looking back apun this stained glass
put all creation back in the box
A contest entry
- A Celebration- 100 Word/Title Prompts! by Metaphorist.
600 points, ended September 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANYTHING by Aajdj.
811 points, ended April 16, 109 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is beautiful!! You did a truly wonderful job!! I LOVE IT!!
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Very nicely done. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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oh what a wonderful world it would be
you know you'll probably dub me a nut after telling you this ... so i'll use the less is more mentality.. lol ..
but be aware that a major and yes even apocalyptic change is going to take place verry soon on this planet..
and it will cause a wave or ripple of change through out the celestial planes (the universe)
a shift in concienceness if you will ... verry soon
lol loved the write
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If people could see life through a stained galss window then how could life ever be dull?
Great work very creative and well done!
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