A soft breath against her neck, velvet
Touch against her skin, and I refused
To mistake this caress for sin, tongue
Expressing poetry upon her chest, leading
Up slowly like my thoughts unfolding, seeking
Out those rosebud lips, like a dance, her
Body bucking, are you afraid I whispered
Into her lips, twin tongues defined by
This orgasm, a mixture of love, sex and
Us, my fingers trailing these twin moons,
I'm reaching paradise, outside the gates
She waits with bated breath for this
Climax of us towards that stratosphere that
Only we may reach, my hand clasped to hers
And my eyes replied follow me and I'll take
You there, her nails leaving marks against
My back, as we fell back against these cotton
Sheets, my fallen angel reaching out for me,
Just a tussle in the dark I told her, a secret
We share, I wondered how long we could stay in
The inferno, how much can you bear?
A contest entry
- Can You Seduce Me? by SuicidalLover.
735 points, ended October 14, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hmmmm.....it was kinda hard for me to read. I guess for me this was a lil too broken up. Take this line - Just a tussle in the dark I told her,
a secret We share,
I wondered how long we could stay,
in The inferno; how much can you bear?
It would have been eaiser to read like that rather than how you did it. BUT I am just a fellow reader, do not take offence.
This was soft. A good beginning. Thank you for entering.
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