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My Time

 

I have fallen so many times before

this time I believe he's locked the door

Desolately lost in a place of endless time

seems the punishment has fit the crime

I now sit Purched upon this bloody stone

with no fault to blame but of my own!

 

I must survive this shattering reign

staying sharpe and feeling no mortal pain

Send me the wrath to test these skills

my soul no longer enjoys darkend thrills

Send me out but,...don't cast me away

the ~Good seeking inside wants to stay

 

 

 

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  • Angelflower
    October 3, 2008

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    This was a really great write.. I love the intensity of it.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 29, 2008

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    the depth of the strengthen in you words, it can only be gotten through experience and time, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • freespirit51
    September 28, 2008

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    I love the pain, anguish and deep emotion you gave your poem. I feel the loss the figure in the picture feels. Excellent work.


  • Janice M Pickett
    September 25, 2008

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    A great take on the picture

    I like this. It has a raw and untamed message of victory for good. Um...Does that make sense? Oh well I know what I mean.LOL I love it. I'm so glad I came to read..


  • ScarletO gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    The good we like to keep inside of us,,,stays and makes the rest of ourself feel guilty. lol Well, that is my interpretation version.

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