They speak of love and happiness
As if they're new to me
And all the while with readiness
To be untrue to me.
A contest entry
- Complete Stress (quickie) by jocelynclaire.
300 points, ended September 29, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Can relate to this you were clear and easy to understand.See why you won gold.
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you so deserved the gold, is is short but wow
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continue
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I know this feeling very much.
Very well said, my friend. -
short but sweet. You said so much in so little. its also very relatable. I love it. thanks for sharing
love always
Tiffany
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Don't you love it?
There is no new thing under the sun.
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That's kind of depressing. Good but depressing. Can I asked what inspired it or is it just one of those things that kind of just built up? OH! In the second line did you mean 'new'?
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A lot said in a few words---Very Brief, but also very intense and heartfelt--Well Done!
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Nice tight poem, comprehensive in its narration and yet compact and well rhymed...and yes, very ironic. You've got flare doll!, Dannie
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