tenaciously stuck
to the man that i love
super glue
Author notes
I asked my husband to name something funny, he said super glue, so here we are.
A contest entry
- haiku humor by Yemassee.
749 points, ended September 27, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never was there a comment that I could not love
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Congratulations on winning the bronze in Yem's haiku humor contest...this was a great haiku providing wonderful images...Well deserved...
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Congratulations!
This is funny...
But TRUE. 
When you both love each other.... YOU BOTH ARE STUCK like SUPER GLUE!
Summer51
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Of all the ways to be stuck,
certainly super glue most permanent.
Clever concept!
Aesthete
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This is funny! I like how you worked out with the super glue here.
I'd keep just 'stuck' as opening line, for the idea of tenaciously we see on super glue as well.
But it's a nice and fun haiku
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A good thing to be stuck on...Your hubby has a good sense of humor..
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Ah now this is creative and cute! I wonder who was the one playing with the super glue?...an even more shocking question...What if you both wanted to be super glued together?
Thanks, the bonds of matrimony sometimes take strange paths.
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This is definately funny, two suggestions though, I think it would flow better without the "with" in second line, and without "potent" in last line. Also no periods in haiku's. But this is much funnier than mine. Thanks for sharing. UNT
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thanks!
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