You are a waterfall
Breaking our backs
Smashing our skulls
Fucking our brains out
Embrace the pain as they stand and stare
Future father, self-condemning faggot
Mother is an unwilling whore
The crowd doesn't applaud
[Evidence of God's Eternal Mercy]
Hundreds of eyes upon her naked flesh
As it is torn by the hands of uncontrolled lust
These animals in man suits
How ironic, the way they call themselves civilized
She tastes blood and hair
But feels nothing but invasion
There have been three men between her legs
Seven hands on her breasts
Three hundred forty two thrusts
All over the course of twenty three minutes
A public parade
To celebrate
The public defacement
Of everything feminine
Author notes
About a public gang rape that happened in Puerto Rico, I believe.
A contest entry
- Apocalypse by Tehuni.
436 points, ended September 28, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me honestly what you think, please.
Comments
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this is very angry, very passionate, and quite good, but not quite what I'm looking for in this contest. I'm not sure, I will read this one again after I've gotten through all the others
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