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beautiful with a twist

You make me feel so
                  {B}roken
                      {E}xhausted
                        {A}bandoned and alone
                            {U}gly and scarred
                              {T}imid and shy
                                  {I}nsecure and afraid
                                    {F}ucked up
                                        {U}seless
                                          {L}ove deprived

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  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    September 29, 2008

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    This is an interesting concept... I love the formatting here! This poem really is spectacular; there is beauty in everything, including pain, and that message is very clear here. Well done!

    Laura, aka Immortal