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this morning
has nothing to do with dead leaves:
near autumn

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A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    Very good! i like your approach thank you for entering


    • maggiejamespoet silver member
      October 16, 2008
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      Haiku R'Us, especially here at AP--thanks for your comment about my haiku (couldn't help myself about the leaves, sorry). As always contest was fun and a pleasure--thank you for the contest!


  • penman gold member
    September 27, 2008
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    Wonderful

    What a masterfully created haiku. so very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

    • maggiejamespoet silver member
      September 29, 2008
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment! As you can tell haiku is my favorite form. Haiku is up there with kittens and chocolate!