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Five things

Sit down
It's a story so deep
So far
It never let me sleep

My words are being spoken
But it's sound is so broken

And you can't break free

Five things I need to tell you...

One- I cared about you...
Two- I need to talk to you...
And three- I just want you...
Four- I always miss you...
Well, five- I just love you...

Lay here
Wish you would just listen
Stay here
I want you to shut up, Christan

My heart is torn
I feel like I'm not born

You did this to me...

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  • gothicchick16
    October 3, 2008
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    very good/awsome

    the poem was deep and inspiring but that is what I think! do what your heart is telling you to do and go with your instinct. And thanks alot for sharing that poem with me.