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- sunshinegirl -

Missing image

~*~

Forever

this person has given

herself to many and yet the days

of happiness destroyed losing a treasured gift

that comes around only once in a

lifetime She's my little

Nyetta

~*~

Upon a

drifting melody she

continues singing songs of worshp

within the depths of her soul as she begins to

count her blessings every morning

Eternities passions

invoking

~*~

Rekindle

tropical blazes from

teardrops as they water innermost

feelings secure and hidden on currents abyss

So hold on my heart as we journey

across pages of lost

horizons

~*~

Rapturing

mended vessels is a

 pathway by which the trinity doeth

hear your cries Listen unto heavenly voices

preparing a special place amongst

lovely Angels You are

beautiful

~*~

 

Author notes

Your options are:


1. write a dedication to anyone listed above to honor them in any style or form or an Acrostic using their penname
(no disrespect or you will be DQ'd)

2. come up with a unique contest idea to make them proud this one will take some imagination
(If you win gold with this option, I will add points if you agree to host your contest creation)

3.If you are familiar with anyone on the list, you may write about something that they love or write in a form or style they admire ...I will leave this option up to you. Write something that you know will personally appeal to the honoree.

Idle Mind Wondering
AliceInPoetryLand
penman
Swan song
ShelleyA
Arkbear
Poeticweaver
NoWayJo
poetryality
sunshinegirl
Sharcu
maa
Lyndon
BluRosePoet8488
PrabhuDayal Khattar
zochit2me
Stormgoddess
kiwigirljacks
Jeremy0826
PassionsPromise
Angelflower
daviscth

 

I chose *sunshinegirl*

& a combination of #1 & #3

 

My Form is a *Triquain Chain*

 

Here are the Instructions for Triquains and Triquain Swirl.

Triquain, a form that can rhyme or non-rhyme.

Seven lines with syllables in multiples of 3 as follows: 3, 6, 9, 12, 9, 6, 3

Triquain Chain: a string of 2 to 4 Triquains, a space between each triquain.

Triquain Crown: a string of 5 Triquains, a space between each triquain.

Triquain Swirl: the repetition of the Triquain string that is

             connected by a 3 syllable line as follows:

                                3, 6, 9, 12, 9, 6, 3, 6, 9, 12, 9, 6, 3 ... and so on.

Also, to be more creative, you may add a hidden thought in your swirl by taking 3 or 4 syllables in line 6 of your first triquain in the swirl and link it to the following 3 syllable lines throughout your poem to make a thought summing up what you have written in your poem.

Triquain and Triquain Swirls are always centered.

 

If, you choose to do a Swirl, drop an inner 3 Syllable line and connect..>>  3,6,9,12,9,6,3,6,9,12,9,6,3,6,9,12,9,6,3

 

 

 

Form credit goes to:  ShelleyA

 

 

A

Triquain Chain

 

Syllable Count:

 

3-6-9-12-9-6-3

( X 4 )

 

every = 3 sylls - http://www.wordscount.info/hw/syllable.jsp

 

doeth = 1 syll - http://www.wordscount.info/hw/syllable.jsp

 

 

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Comments

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  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 24
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    Beautiful photo, words meshed well, flowed nicely ... Stunning!


  • StarEyes
    December 3, 2008

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    How did I miss this? This has tears falling my dear uncle! How in the world do I thank you? I think I entered part one of this one. WOW! I am truly blown away. I am sooooo sorry I missed this! This is amazing!

    You are amazing my dear uncle! I am in total awe of this!

    Congrats on the Bronze!

    I love you!

    and love

    God Bless

    Nyetta


    • Arkbear gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      My pleasure Hun.....be well, stay safe and thanks for all you do for LionsLove Lair...Timmy is so very proud of you

      Uncle Bear ~


  • PermaFrozen
    November 29, 2008
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    oh wow, this is amazing!!!


  • Three Doves
    October 21, 2008

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    Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!

    "so hold on my heart while we journey
    across pages of lost
    horizons.".
    Keeps jumping off the page at me.
    Thank you for sharing a most beautiful dedication to a beautiful angel.


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 26, 2008

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    well done for a beautifully spirited lady whom touches many hearts. the form is a splendor to read and see amidst your mastery. well done and many blessings always xxx


  • Patpowers silver member
    September 26, 2008

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    What a nice way with this one Arkbear! Brilliant job on the tribute and the style. Hope all is well. THANKS!!!


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    This is gorgeous! Such a beautiful dedication for a lovely and deserving poetess and friend!
    Flawless form and touching sentiment makes this a breathtaking piece....Ty for entering this lovely Triquain Chain into my contest!!!

    Lynda

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