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Monster Ball

The Monster Ball comes once a year,
the fun begins on all Hallows Eve.
Night full of witches and ghouls,
weird sights eyes won't believe.

Frankenstein finally lost his mind,
he is dancing with wicked witch.
Frankie better be careful with her,
his mind's is held in with a stitch.

Werewolf is dancing with Vampira,
she runs her fingers through his hair.
With nails are sharp as razor blades,
her hugs are more then he can bear.

Scarecrow spiked the the punch bowl,
dance with the devil and feeling fine.
Everyone wants to bob for red apples
they are floating in blackberry wine.

Dracula is making out in the bathroom,
Frankenstein opens door, goes inside,
Dracula bites the neck of an ugly girl,
oh goodness, it's Frankenstein's bride.

Frankie and Dracula's brawl is chaos,
their fight turns into a free for all.
Now everyone is having so much fun,
a great ending at the Monsters Ball.

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 2, 2008

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    OMG LMAO here. Love the ending to this the most. Why not Frankie and Drac battling it out? Every other evil moster has!! LOL. Excellent.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm

  • Angel1002
    October 26, 2008
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    sorry forgot applause!

  • Angel1002
    October 26, 2008

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    This is such a wonerful tale. It has such a fun filled atmosphere to it that I really enjoyed reading it!


  • RuthKephart
    October 22, 2008

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    I hadn't looked at any of the other entries before posting my poem and when I went back to look at some of the others imagine my suprise when I saw yours What can I say, great minds think alike! Your ball sounds like a grand time
    Ruth


    • Sandygram
      October 23, 2008
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      Thank You Ruth

      Glad you enjoy the Monster Ball. *batty* Thank you for stopping by and reading. It is most appreciated. Take care.

      Sandy

  • chiefmac
    September 26, 2008

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    Fun with fantasy as the holiday approaches. The reader has the feel that the dance could be at the local high school with all the goul. The rhyme and flow is smooth, lots of images to absorb with fun for all. Thanks for the read

    • Sandygram
      September 26, 2008
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      Thank You Dan

      BOO!!!!!!!!!! So glad you enjoyed the poem! This was a fun write. Thank you for reading and leaving your nice comment. Hugs and Take care. ,

      Bless You,
      Sandy


  • Ken-Maverick
    September 26, 2008

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    Soooo Coooool, lol
    What an intersting take,
    you've penned a brilliant piece of poetry here
    Good luck in the contest,
    i see a shinny coming your way
    Take care
    Ken


    • Sandygram
      September 26, 2008
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      Thank You Ken

      I appreciate you dropping by and reading. Thank you for your nice comment. You take care. Sandy

  • mcheadle
    September 25, 2008
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    Everyone was there except casper

    A good party to hi tail it to...mac

    • Sandygram
      September 26, 2008
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      Good Morning Mac,

      Well I look forward to seeing you there. I wonder what costume my friend will be wearing. Maybe an ANGEL.
      Always a delight when you stop by. Se you at the party. Take care.

      Blessings,
      Sandy

  • Bob Fox
    September 25, 2008
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    Hi

    And a very happ Halloween gal.

    • Sandygram
      September 26, 2008
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      Good Morning Bob

      Always a delight to hear from you. Hsppy Halloween to you to.
      Thank you for the great comment!! You take care.

      Sandy


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    lol


    Lotsa of fun going on here at the "Monster Bash"

    "Dracula is making out in the bathroom,
    Frankenstein opens door, goes inside,
    Dracula bites the neck of an ugly girl,
    oh goodness, it's Frankenstein's bride."


    Wish you the best in the contest
    Much love

    David

    • Sandygram
      September 26, 2008
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      Thank You!!!!!!!!

      TRICK OR TREAT my friend. I always smile at your comments. Hope all is well there.
      You take care. Hugs and Smiles,

      Blessings being sent to you.
      Sandy

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