Everything i did for you was
just to show, just prove how much
i loved you
you took for granite how easily i could
throw us away i want to know why the fuck
are you to say,
who i can be friends with,
what i should wear,
how i should act,
how to put up my hair!?!
im sick and tired of this shit that im going
through
never being enough and and never doing enough for you
i can't be good enough always letting everyone down
they just point and laugh when they see me fall to the ground!
i can't take it how you are one of those kids how you always
forbid me to do things
i want to stand on my own two feet not kiss and bow to yours!
its done babe! im through with you! take your things and leave this is done!
Author notes
this is stupid people don't realize that when you are in a relatioship you don't live and feed off that person you try to make things better and make each other happy thats obviously did NOT go down today i'm pissed and need a cookie.....
breaking up with michael, its stupid how we continue like its all ok when its not
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=[... i really like the way you turned your emotions into such a great poem. I like the way you wrote it, it was different. Also, the words are alive on the page and they are filled with emotion.
In addition, I could totally connect with you because I recently broke up with someone too (my best friend, we were SO close {boohoo}) and I need a cookie too and maybe a therapist and someone to talk too. =[
ANYWAY, it was good reading this because somehow it made me feel stronger. thank you for writing this poem. I loved it and i wish I could give you a billion applauses.
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