I feel like crying every time i laugh, my mind's filled with you.
I feel guilty for being happy, I don't know what to do.
I don't know how it happened, i just know that it did.
I've fallen out of love with you, and into love with him.
A contest entry
- Your Maverick Prewrites . . . by RatherImaginative.
925 points, ended October 16, 2008, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any advice?
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There is a story behind this piece that is begging to be told, and that is the beauty of the poem. On the other hand, I can't help but feel slightly irritated with the speaker (my apologies if this is written from life
), because of the disregard the individual shows for the former loved one. Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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This is fabulous dear, I can't relate [haha], but I love it.
Keep it up!
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haha thanks, oh and i like your hair it's very prettyful... i saw your myspace pics. thanks for the comment though. i don't think it's that great but i don't think any of them are.
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