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Three Little Words!!!

Your words hurt me
so just go away
nothing matters anymore
thanks to you
Don't give me the innocent look
youre the one who said
the tree little words
I dont want you near me
I'm trying to move on
i dont want an appology
it's not good enough
you're the one that said
three little words
Do you think this is a game
I can't believe after all we been through
you tell me three little words
that stung worse than all of your
other words and hits.
At night your words haunt me
as i lay down to sleep
(I hate you! I hate you! I hate you!)

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  • Dexton
    January 20
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    deep. real deep

  • fillurhands
    November 23, 2008
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    Very raw emotion, powerful and to the point - just the way I like a poem. Those 3 little words will certainly haunt a person. "i dont want an appology it's not good enough" - so true, once those words are uttered you can't overlook it - nothing removes the sting.

  • deaderbetter
    October 16, 2008

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    i really like this poem!my favorite lines are "nothing matters anymore thanks to you"good job keep writing!


  • jezz
    October 14, 2008
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    wow powerful write
    long time no chat, what ya been up to?