This big, broad pool is full of dreams
Full of adventures and silly schemes
We stand on the diving board, peering down
There are friends we haven't met, all around
We see doors unopened and roads not yet taken
We see so much potential which has yet to waken
We even see rainbows the colour of every skittle
but it's time to stop looking, let's LIVE a little
Take my hand, this is our chance
Let's take a leap and make a splash!
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photo credit to inmagine.com
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This was so beautiful and uplifting! such depth to it! I truly loved the feel of this and the laughter that I felt while reading..
thank you very much for sharing!
Angel
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Wow, this poem is beautiful, and inspirational, I absouloutly love it, the picture and the background really matches what you decribed. The ryhming is exellent...!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hi Ellie,
this is a beautiful thoughtful poem, i love the way it is written and the background is so fitting.
Slán
Dolores x
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*coughs politely* Ellie is very wise for her age, and talented, and open, and loving - and the list is endless. Nevermind what she says; I've seen her grow on the site over the past two years now, and she's just one heck of an amazing person
Ellie, it's SO good to see you writing again, I've really, really missed reading your works... they're always just so perfect!
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Wow Ellie this is amazing! Your writing gets better and better each time I read it. The picture and the background go perfectly with this poem. You should be mighty proud of yourself. Thanks for sharing, sweetheart.
Love Brian
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Thank you!
I've been trying lots of different backgrounds with it to find the perfect one and I just can't seem to choose! 
Thank you for the the lovely comment Ellie
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