When my time on earth is over,
and my love of life is through.
I'd like to spend each moment,
of eternity with you.
When silence at my journeys end,
brings everlasting peace.
I'd love for you to walk with me,
where earthly bonds have ceased.
I'd want for you to hold my hand,
and let our spirits fly.
Beyond the stars to rainbows end,
across a moonlit sky.
A contest entry
- ~*~Love Without End~*~ by Trisha W.
700 points, ended November 3, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - depressing or love poems. by SiC.
500 points, ended October 16, 73 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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amazing poem. short and full of emotions. great job.
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This is simply wonderful, and a great expression of love...sometimes we are lucky enough to find the person we would want to spend the eternity after life with, and what a treasure that is... heartwarming as well as a great write!
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wow!
this is an awsome write! love the flow n' the rythm...veery touching, but unfortunately u didn't follow all the rules and put ~*~ ~*~ as shown in the contest title...i will give u one more chance just cuz i love this write...
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Perfect!
This is a great read for me to finish out the day, and go to bed. I want this of my beloved, too. Thank you for a lovely poem.
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Wish
If this is 100per cent of how it will be, then I worry no more!!! I love this, it almost gets me excited, I say almost because I'm happy where i am at the moment, and I'll leave the full excitement to when it happens!!! -
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Thanks GT for such a lovely comment. Glad you enjoyed....mal
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I am overwhelmed...
with the simplicity yet profound beauty of this poem; your words captivate my heart, this is poetry in its purest form, sweet surrender superbly sublime...words escape me
John
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Aw John, many thanks for such a lovely comment. So pleased you liked it....Bless you...mal
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