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Straight Jacket

A vacuum burns to a halt
the dust settles
so now you look for a broom

Yet one can not be found
hay is strewn in blusters aftermath
and hinges rust from constant turmoil

Looking around, nothing but white
hearing no sound, feeling no breath
confusion screams

Embrace yourself in a pillowed haven


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Host Prompt: The years vanished in one word.

A contest entry

Can you guess my "one" word?

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  • penman gold member
    September 26, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest