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Go.Ne

We had started something special
That came to an undesired end
I had grown to like you alot
I referred to you as my friend
We laughed at each other's jokes
Brightened each other's day
But now it's as if you never existed
You've completely gone away...

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    October 1, 2008
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    This is an excellent write!! Great take on the prompt!! Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!

  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    I need to know which song you are referring to or I'll have to DQ you. Plz let me know and I will comment then.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 25, 2008
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    i can feel ..

    the breeze blow by.. yup gone! just like that. sad, but good write my friend.

  • mcfreeman
    September 25, 2008
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    blown by and into the wind


  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 25, 2008
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    This is good but lets write something happy or something about a good thing next time

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