Heart split in two
love for one
coexisting with another,
two lives burdening
my singular being
threatening to tumble pillars
of my crumbling soul.
Both needed
for my completeness;
without one
I am nothing
with both
I am determined to fail-
my divided heart
shattered to pieces
rendering my love of two
into a void
alone.
In a list
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel Again.... by PerfectImperfection.
900 points, ended October 14, 2008, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great write, I enjoyed reading this. Could feel the pain and the struggle with the deicison.
Good luck -
congrats on the HM
well deserving!
Mylee
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A beautiful piece of pain. So many of us know all to well the loss of love - in many fashions. Nicely penned. thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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I agree with thepoetssoul that this is a very thought provoking poem. You have very effective descriptions. Great job!
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Very good, wow I was reading this and the words seemed to just draw me into them. Making me feel exactly as they intended. I could feel the heartbreak in this poem. Very well done, and good luck in the contest.
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This is a most exellent penning indeed.One or both?Give your heart two both or to one?These are all very hard decisions one must make!And a pending question one must decide to be clear of this void.This is a very thought provoking penning that is well written.
Best of luck and best of wishes to you.
Tony
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