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Pain Is A Poison

Silently she waits for closure,
Silently tears are born and have died,
Sitting in this room
Glancing at the memories that were made
Heartsick pain seeps through everything,
The walls, the floor, the bed, the window;
Sinking into the skin, its like a poison;
Slowly the day passes her by,
Time will have to heal her broken heart,
Till then the pain she must persevere,
Silently she waits for closure,
As she will each passing day.

A contest entry

just a quick write mostly relating to my heart being broken..again. Even 19 is too young to marry....

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  • trekkergirl
    September 30, 2008
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    sounds like a lot of emotional pain going on here. Good way to get your emotions across. Good job


  • Deaths Servant
    September 25, 2008
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    Great Poem. Good Luck!