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~My Angel~

If all the world was in love
Then they'd let me hold you forever,
And that's what I want to do.
I want to get lost in your arms and in your kiss
I want to close my eyes and feel love
Then open them to see love,  
You looking at me.
When I hold you close I know I am loved
That we protect each other.
I feel your heart beat next to mine
Your body rises with each breath
And I can feel it.
When I hold you
I am holding an angel
A beautiful heart that loves me
And i sigh.
Love is a fantastic dream of me and you and
A neverending hug and a wish
For an everlasting kiss.

By:JRC

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Written January 23rd, 2004

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  • Nuisant
    March 21, 2004
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    Jarrod... You Don't Really Know Me... Hehe. But! I Have Heard ALOT About You. It's All Jenn Ever Talks About! I Find This Very Romantic And Very Lovable! (as cheezey as I put it... it's the truth!) I Believe You And Jenn Will Last A Lifetime. All My Blessings Go To You And Jenn. May Al Your Dreams Come True!
    *~* Kate *~*


  • finding myself 84
    January 23, 2004
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    This is absolutely one of the sweetest poems I think that I've ever read. You and Jemmy are so mean to be and I'm so glad that everything has worked out for the best for you! You guys deserve to be happy... Beautiful poem! Luv ya *sonya*

  • Faithcomesin
    January 23, 2004
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    Aww this is so sweet. U write from ur heart. I like these love poems u write for Jenn. luves ME

  • Jenn Lynn
    January 23, 2004
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    Baby, I thought you said I was no angel ...but on a seperate note, this was wonderful! You know I love you with everything I have and so so so much more....Your my world and nothing is ever going to take you away from me. It took me 2 years to get you back, and from here on out, I'll be with you untill the end of time. Your my everything, and nothing will ever change that.
    Love Always n Forever,
    ~*Jenn